Hello Ed,
1)
In your 8:14 Video the MLG bounced around six times. I think that is too much. Realistically it should be three or four times.
2)
The position of the magenta constraint at the beginning is still not correct. It should be moved more to the left until it aligns with the first letter of the waypoint above it.
3)
I know I have mentioned it already, but the cabin surveillance camera is not colored in real life. It should be black/white.
4)
In my opinion the engine sounds are a little bit too loud and too unsynchronized.
I know that you are using the UK2000 scenery. If you would use the simwings scenery, do you need to adjust the ground map for it, or can you use the same ground map?
Personally I use the simwings version.
Greetings